Hi, Fatima I am Hannah from Karoro School. I really like how you have put steps in the order that things happened. Maybe next time you could put in why Bradley Chalkers is not a good friend or why he is creepy, you could also add in what he would do to you if you sat next to him.
Hi, Fatima I am Hannah from Karoro School. I really like how you have put steps in the order that things happened. Maybe next time you could put in why Bradley Chalkers is not a good friend or why he is creepy, you could also add in what he would do to you if you sat next to him.
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