Friday 3 November 2017

The telescopictext

This term my classroom has been stretching sentences, which includes adjectives verbs and adverbs and who where when what why. I have a link of it if you wanna try it and a photo how it looks like.
So there is a work I have done on that site you should tell your class room and your school to do it it will be really fun.

Blog ya later!!!!!!!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Fatima my name is Alla and I go to Owairaka District school and I am in room 22. I really like how you introduced this new site that you discovered and I really like your story about "The lion", next time you could use less full stops and more commas.

    Blog ya later
    By Alla

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  2. Hi Fatima, My name is Yussra from Owairaka School.
    I really like your Telescopic text writing. I have done on of these ones on my blog to so you can check that out. Maybe next time you could read it again because when I was reading through it I found some mistakes.

    Here is my blog if you want to check it out and comment http://odsyussraa.blogspot.co.nz/

    Blog you later Yussra.

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